老師講義--真題透析09年公共英語(yǔ)等級(jí)考試寫作備考

                                 主講：石嵩

   作文：1.功能性作文
  Temporary Hotel Receptionist
  Pleasant mediate-sized hotel at the heart of Cambridge seeks a young person with pleasant   personality to assist the reception office.
  Previous experience an advantage but not essential.
  Acknowledge of at least one foreign language.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　The name of the hotel
  Write an application letter to the hotel manager to apply the position. The letter must include the following two points:
  The reason that you apply
  Ask for the interview
  At the end of the letter don't write your own name and use "Li Li"to instead .
  2.write an essay
  There are two pictures. Write an essay about these two pictures.
  Describe these two pictures
  What do you learn from these two pictures
  Picture
  1.一個(gè)人在路上騎自行車，他把傘鉤在了他前面的卡車上，用卡車?yán)T車。
  2.這個(gè)人從醫(yī)院剛剛包扎好出來。

  解析：
  一、第一部分要求考生寫一份求職申請(qǐng)（Letter of Application for Employment），當(dāng)看到此題時(shí)，
  1.考生要注意審題
  1）首先仔細(xì)閱讀該廣告；
  2）弄清楚招聘單位對(duì)應(yīng)聘者的要求；
  3）假設(shè)自己就是應(yīng)聘者，對(duì)照自身情況，看是否符合要求。尤其注意從技能（Skills）、專長(zhǎng)（Speciality）、所受過的職業(yè)訓(xùn)練（Training）、工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)（Experience）和教育背景（Educational Background）等幾方面作自我評(píng)估，尋找兩相吻合的地方。
  2. 寫求職信時(shí)應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)
  1）寫明你的詳細(xì)地址及電話號(hào)碼，以便對(duì)方與你聯(lián)系；
  2）稱呼得當(dāng)。
  如果廣告上沒有寫聯(lián)系人是誰(shuí)，則在求職信的開頭可用：Dear Sir或Dear sirs。保險(xiǎn)一點(diǎn)，可寫 Dear sir/Dear madam。 如果廣告上已寫明聯(lián)系人，在寫求職信時(shí)，你就應(yīng)寫其姓名：Dear Mr. Smith,或Dear Ms. Shirley Green等。
  3）求職信應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)短，引人注意。
  3. 求職申請(qǐng)信的格式
  1)開場(chǎng)白（Opener）
  最好開門見山，直接寫明你寫此信的目的，避免不必要的客套。
  ⑴ I'm writing to apply for the position of ......advertised in today's Shanghai Daily.
  ⑵ In replying to your advertisement in today's Shanghai Daily, I am applying for the position of......
  ⑶ In /Through today's newspaper I noticed your advertisement for ... /I have learned that you are hiring...
  ⑷ I would like to apply for /to be considered as a candidate for the job/ post/ position advertised in... / I saw advertised in / I have just seen in the ...  
  2) 正文（Body）
  寫求職信就像推銷產(chǎn)品，言辭必須具有說服力，能打動(dòng)對(duì)方。因此在正文中，你必須著重強(qiáng)調(diào)你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、長(zhǎng)處，如學(xué)歷、工作經(jīng)歷等，來證明你就是對(duì)方希望招聘的人員。但切忌過分夸張。
  ⑴ My working experience includes two months part-time receptionist with a CNR Co. and one year part-time assistant office manager for Haper's Stationery.
  ⑵ I feel I am well qualified to ... for the following reasons...
  ⑶ I have experience of ..., therefore I may have the ability you are looking for.
  3) 結(jié)尾（Close）
  最后，你可寫一些希望參加面試并請(qǐng)求對(duì)方盡快給你答復(fù)等客套話。
  ⑴If my application is successful, I should /would like to...
  ⑵I am available for a personal interview if you are interested in my application.
  ⑶I would appreciate an interview at your convenience.
  ⑷If these meet your requirements, please grant me an interview. I look forward to your early reply.
  ⑸May I discuss my qualifications more fully with you at some time you find convenient? Please call (021)632-8976 at any time .
  像這樣的功能性作文都比較格式化，所以考生在備考的時(shí)候一定要多積累一些功能句，頭腦中要對(duì)此類作文有大致的框架。
  二、第二部分是一個(gè)大作文，與07年的作文是同一類型看圖作文。
  絕大多數(shù)考生對(duì)此類型的作文并不陌生，平時(shí)也都做了很多訓(xùn)練。但在考試中還是會(huì)看到很多學(xué)員面對(duì)考題無從下手?？磮D作文寫作的關(guān)鍵是要弄清楚題意，即清楚所給圖畫想要傳達(dá)的真正信息是什么，理解圖畫的表層含義及深層含義，然后將其清楚、正確地表達(dá)出來。
  看圖作文的一般寫作模式是：
  開始段：描述圖畫表層含義及深層含義并由此得出結(jié)論。
  中間段：解釋原因、分析結(jié)果，或進(jìn)一步論證主題思想。
  結(jié)束段：提出建議或發(fā)表個(gè)人評(píng)論。  
  下面給出一我們?cè)谶@樣的作文中會(huì)使用到的一些句型，僅供大家參考:
  描述圖畫：
  1)As is described in the picture... The picture shows...
  2)The picture describes... It indicates that...
  3)In the picture, we can see ... It reveals that...
  解釋原因：
  1)There may be several possible reasons for which will be demonstrated below.
  2)The explanation for this phenomenon involves many complicated factors.
  3)A combination/ number of factors may contribute to/ account for...
  另一個(gè)原因：
  1)Among all the important/convincing reasons above, one should be emphasized...
  2)Of course, this does not in itself explain/ account for...
  3)One of the most common/ popular reasons for ... is that...

  表明態(tài)度：
  1) As the issue plays such an important part in both society and our life, due/ more attention should be paid to it.
  2) As the issue has a far reaching influence on both society and our life, due/ more attention should be paid to it.
  舉例：
To take ... as an example, One example is..., Another example is..., for example
  承上啟下的連接詞：
  1） to begin with, then, furthermore, finally
  2） to start with, next, in addition, finally
  3） most important of all, moreover, finally
  4） on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點(diǎn))
  5） for one thing, for another thing  
  結(jié)尾：
  用于過渡的短語(yǔ)：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus, Therefore, we can find that...
  Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
  Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
  Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
  在考試的過程中，有很多考生不會(huì)合理的安排時(shí)間，他們習(xí)慣在試卷上打草稿然后再謄寫在答題卡上，這樣很浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。建議考生應(yīng)練習(xí)打腹稿。而且在考試過程中，不要"求難，求異"，要"求準(zhǔn)"。有些考生英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)不是很扎實(shí)，也總想在作文中寫出一些高難的句子，結(jié)果弄巧成拙，要想寫出質(zhì)量高的句子并非一日之功，而是需要我們考生在平時(shí)多下功夫。

     為了滿足各位考友的需求，環(huán)球英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)校特推出公共英語(yǔ)等級(jí)考試網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程，考官主講、教學(xué)風(fēng)格自然、講解透徹、分析精辟、直擊考試。